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My editorial business is called Lighthouse Book Coaching ~ because when we're writing, we're submerged in our stories, and when we feel lost at sea, a coach isn't just an editor ~ they're a mentor and cheerleader who lights a path forward. 

You can count on real feedback. I'm kind, but I won't pull punches when it comes to the work that's needed to make your book better.  

If you're writing fantasy ~ for any age ~ I'd love to hear what you're working on. Scroll down to learn more about me as an editor, and if you have questions about my services, feel free to email me: gkbyrnebooks@gmail.com 

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The Portal Package

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First-time client introductory offer!
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This is a great way to try out professional book coaching and work with me at a reduced rate.

I’ll review your pitch and the first chapter of your book (up to 15 pages). You'll get in-line notes, an edit letter identifying next steps, and any resources or recommendations I think you'll find helpful, then we’ll have a zoom call to discuss the feedback.
 
$150



 

The Deeper Dive Package

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You've started your book and need some guidance and feedback to see clearly what's working and what isn't ~ and to get on a path that feels right for your story.

This package is offered at two price points. In both I'll review your pitch and your book "blueprint", and you will receive in-line notes, an edit letter, and a zoom call to discuss and answer your questions:

50-page manuscript review:  $800



The same package is also offered with review of your entire book: $2500



 

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Coaching Package 

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This package offers ongoing support and accountability. Submit short stories, chapters/scenes, or material that fleshes out your story/characters. We'll work together throughout.

There is a three-month minimum required to sign up for this package.

Start with a pitch and blueprint or with pages (your choice), and submit up to 20 pages for each check in. You’ll get in-line notes, an edit letter, and a zoom call to discuss the feedback and answer your questions:

20 pages 1ce a month: $350



20 pages 2ce a month: $700

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Why choose me as your editor/book coach?

  • My books are published with a "Big 5" publisher ~ and while I can't promise you an agent or publishing contract (no one can), I can help you grow as a writer, and share publishing insights. 

  • I've worked as an editor, critique partner, and mentor for all kinds of writers (published and unpublished) to help improve their stories.

  • I have an MA in literature (and a second BS in environmental studies).

  • I'm a proud Author Accelerator certified book coach, and a member of: The Science Fiction Fantasy Writers Association (where I serve on the MG/YA steering committee), The Author's Guild, The Pacific Northwest Writer's Association, The Society for Children's Book Writers and Illustrators, The Romance Writers of America, and The Mythopoeic Society. In other words, I’m deeply engaged with the writing community—and have been for many years.

  • I'm a values-forward editor and an unapologetic progressive. I'm an LGBTQA+ ally (and love queer stories, btw). I believe in science and climate change. I also believe: Black Lives Matter, women's rights and transgender rights are human rights, no book should be banned, and that we need diverse books in all our communities. I will call out assumptions in your work (and my own) when I see them.

© Gabrielle Byrne, 2025

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